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Hi Felicia, I like the topic of your war story and way you made the ending. I like how Caesar helped save the people who needed it. Maybe next time make it a bit smaller so it fits properly on the page. ;D
Dear Felicia, I did my ANZAC slides about Caesar as well! You did your polylining wonderfully and I enjoyed watching it, next time I think you should try using screencastify so that we don't have to click on the page or play it slowly. But overall I think you did a fantastic job, Sierra.
thats cool how we both did our slide about caesar. thank you for you nice positive comments i and next time i'll try to use the screencastify and i'll make it faster :)
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Hi Felicia I really liked the way you used an ambulance. It's cool how you did the blood It was really interesting.
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Thanks gabrielle ;)
Deletehi felicia i like how you made it real.made next time you can make a bit small.
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ok thanks for the feed back capria :)
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ReplyDeleteI like the topic of your war story and way you made the ending.
I like how Caesar helped save the people who needed it.
Maybe next time make it a bit smaller so it fits properly on the page.
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ok thank you very much for your feed back too next time i'll try to make it smaller :)
DeleteDear Felicia, I did my ANZAC slides about Caesar as well! You did your polylining wonderfully and I enjoyed watching it, next time I think you should try using screencastify so that we don't have to click on the page or play it slowly. But overall I think you did a fantastic job, Sierra.
ReplyDeletethats cool how we both did our slide about caesar. thank you for you nice positive comments i and next time i'll try to use the screencastify and i'll make it faster :)
DeleteHELLO Felicia!I love your work and the dog is so cute.I am not sure what you would have to work on ,because I don't think there is much else to.
ReplyDeleteThank you jess for you lovely postive comment i think there is actually things i need to work on so still thank you alot :)
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