Moment in time - Felicia
In term 3 we had to write a moment in time for our writing assessment. I wasn't sure what topic I wanted to choose so I thought back to a few weeks on netball game. It was very interesting even though we didn't win. I wanted to explain my game but also add some twist and turns to make it more dramatic cause when you have a normal plain piece of writing there is no excitement and fun so please read my story and give me feedback on what i have made a mistake on.
Thank you Felicia
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